Sunday, March 20, 2011

WINGS

Charmed by the rusting old thing
you went there, of wrought chains and a wooden plank
was an old, abandoned swing
Nostalgia caught up with you,
with your highened excitement,
conspicuously, in your heart, it did imbue.
The joy had made you impervious,
seeing this made me a tad bit jelous, but then,
I cursed myself for being so envious

It was delightful to watch you sway
the firm grip on the chains
made sure you would not stray

But you, well, you wanted to fly
And reach the sky? I chide,
The rusting swing can take you only as high.

It’s only the wings that can make one fly, I thought
for them, from time immemorial,
I had valiantly sought.

I see the gleaming intent in your eyes
to transgress, to break free
but I deem the idea to be utterly unwise

Well, you still seem to be impervious
slowly making me more curious, but then,
the idea, unmistakably overzelous

Your ideas are taking their toll,
Your gaze still transfixed upon the heights
the swing, now clearly out of control.

All I hope is for you, not to fall
Your psyche dented, greater would be the pall
My envy turns into pride, I see you go past
Fly my angel, you soar at last......


-sk
08 .03.2011

10 comments:

  1. wow plain impressive :D
    ws such a treat readin t :)
    too gud !!

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  2. the improvement is easily visible mach. good going. u rite now my friend are soaring up the swing and me. well. im jus standing back and envying myself of feeling jealous of you.. ha ha ha :D but sexy. ur choice of words are awesome lo.. :)

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  3. gr8 job mate.... amazing choice of words... my envy turns into pride... seriously... u gotta make this big mate... sorry, but there r some speeling mistakes i see... dunno if it was intentional....

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  4. @bisket : machaa lo :D
    thanx dude.....am honoured :)

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  5. thank u vig!!!
    make it big!! i din't get u ;)
    LoL....it's overzealous....it is a spelling error!! whereas highened is not an english word but anyway i have used it due to lack of an suitable 'euphemism' :D

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  6. It was supposed to be " it is ur life, make it large" as in royal stag... Instead of "make it big"...

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  7. oh nice nice......give me some ideas no....to make it large ;)

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  8. AMAZING WORK.....LIKED IT A LOT :-)

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